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Postby Bambi » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:08 pm

Great job on the video. Would be nice to see more stuff like this make its way out there.

alexironaek wrote: i like the dud too. :D and the video is GREAT. we should contact the kickstarter campaign group and ask them to put it the kickstarter page...don't know if they will agree though.

Awesome Japan don't seem to have taken on board any feedback regarding the campaign thus far.
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Yokosuka » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:09 pm

Where did you find the transparent logo of Shenmue III please ?
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Jackie Fhan » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:11 pm

As long as they make some big moves this week... it should be ok but there will always be some money lost from their lack of effort the last 3 or 4 days.
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Postby Doom_Infinite » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:22 pm

Fantastic video. The dub is awesome for a fan made dub. I think his voice would really suit a game dub. Still though for a commercial purpose video (well it's not commercial but we are asking for pledges) it doesn't quite suit as well imo. You would want a voice that sounds more like an announcer or radio person I guess.
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Jibby » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:27 pm

Yokosuka wrote: Where did you find the transparent logo of Shenmue III please ?

Here's the one that is in the non dub version:
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The one in the dub version can be found here:
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Also thank you to everyone who has left feedback. I do appreciate it :)
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Postby Ziming » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:35 pm

You misspelled "Kickstarter" on the no dub version. Besides that it's awesome!

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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Jibby » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:37 pm

Ziming wrote: You misspelled "Kickstarter" on the no dub version. Besides that it's awesome!

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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Jackie Fhan » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:40 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RSmsMq5TkxY might be hard to transition it, but worth a shot maybe. Slightly longer outrun, and other game footage could look really nice though.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3XbYvA ... -E&index=3

24 seconds- always good video, blurry scene to scene transition music :)



https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6kFIXo7Z9I this is more suitable for credits or flashes of gameplay imo

just a few ideas if you ever do intend to work on it more in future, great job. Really love the gameplay segments in the video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCBpP99hbx4
one i had forgot about, edit*
either way, this music is awesome
for those of you that never heard it, enjoy!

Let's not foret this game also

Just as good imo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0JQwvmE1MIQ Love the sst =D>
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby raunchy » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:43 pm

If you are planning on re-making the video, I can try another attempt, but this time just reading it plainly and not exaggerated. I'm not really happy with my voice after thinking it over.
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Gavan » Tue Jun 23, 2015 12:53 pm

Great video. The only thing I didn't like was the shaking logo.
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Xandui » Tue Jun 23, 2015 2:48 pm

Hey Jibby, seriously great work. Coming with some late feedback, i think the video is already good and could be great with a bit more revision.

Here are my notes:
- the gaussian blur image of the arcade games feels super amateur. i think you do a great job teasing the epic-ness of shenmue in the video and i would just focus on that from the start (falling petals, opening cinematic, etc). i might be wrong, but i think most folks won't even remember these older titles Yu worked on. You could almost start the whole thing at 28 seconds
- the "free fights" section feels a bit long
- still think the demo footage of shenmue 3 could be cut entirely

Also i think you should just delete the dub off of youtube. Having multiple versions is gonna split traffic and confuse sharing. I really appreciate that you guys put in the time to dub the video but i feel strongly it works MUCH better without the dub.
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Mr357 » Tue Jun 23, 2015 3:03 pm

He could just make the dub unlisted.
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Jibby » Tue Jun 23, 2015 3:22 pm

Xandui wrote: Hey Jibby, seriously great work. Coming with some late feedback, i think the video is already good and could be great with a bit more revision.

Here are my notes:
- the gaussian blur image of the arcade games feels super amateur. i think you do a great job teasing the epic-ness of shenmue in the video and i would just focus on that from the start (falling petals, opening cinematic, etc). i might be wrong, but i think most folks won't even remember these older titles Yu worked on. You could almost start the whole thing at 28 seconds
- the "free fights" section feels a bit long
- still think the demo footage of shenmue 3 could be cut entirely

Also i think you should just delete the dub off of youtube. Having multiple versions is gonna split traffic and confuse sharing. I really appreciate that you guys put in the time to dub the video but i feel strongly it works MUCH better without the dub.

Thanks man! Appreciate the feedback, but due to the incredibly rapid surge of popularity that the video seems to have gained in only a few hours, I feel that it's too late to make a new revision. The video's already spread a lot and I feel that it's unlikely to spread like that again if re-uploaded. Thank you for the constructive criticism though. This sort of feedback is actually really useful to me outside of Shenmue as well because it's stuff like this that I want to do with my life :)
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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby Mr357 » Wed Jun 24, 2015 4:04 pm

Almost 5000 views! Keep sharing this!

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Re: Please share this alternative Shenmue III Kickstarter vi

Postby NeoShredder » Thu Jul 09, 2015 1:07 am

They've used your video on the campaign page!

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