by Peter » Fri Apr 15, 2016 10:15 am
That's fantastic Kiske, I love that!
Can I make a suggestion just to see what it looks like? See the dots, could they be removed altogether? In fact the entire line behind the bottom of the "S"? Also remove the swish of the slight connection on the "h" and the loop at the top? If you are busy, I will have some time in a few hours to mess around and do it. Also perhaps space the letters out a little more. That way it still remains more or less in the same style, BUT also removes the cursive element and spaces the letters which Suzuki-san is after. I think it's a winner!
Just to see what it looks like, since this can still sort of fall under cursive. I think Suzuki-san would need to see that.